Recount editing

Yesterday we had a Scavenger Hunt . We first had to got into 3's and "they must be in a different group" .My group member's names were Alayah and Raera. We had a piece of paper and it said Tahi.And it also said a secret phasers on the paper. the clue was around the school, including the office.

We had our first clue.so then we had to solve that clue, and our clue was Tahi.Room 10 was wrong the office was wrong and LS2 was wrong.But room 1 was right. and room 5 was right We did lots of running but we also worked as a group to try and find the answer.There was lots of people running around, to try and find the secret phrase.

We came back to LS1 then Mr wong check our paper.we got it wrong. So then we had to do some stretches.Finley he told us what the answer.

LI: To edit a recount of an activity.Today i had to editing my recount.what i had to put in my recount.I had to put into my recount Simple, compound, and complex sentences.Capital letters and full stops. a/an in the correct places. speech marks. correctly spelt contractions.