LI: To write a hook for our narratives.
This week for writing we were writing our hooks for our narratives. A hook draws the readers attention and creates questions to be answered during the story. We had the option of stating the hook with an onomatopoeia (sound) or we could start from the end of the story and then jump back in the beginning.
I am a Year 6 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space1 and my teachers are Mr Wong and Mr Ogilive.
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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Friday, 6 December 2019
Tuesday, 26 November 2019
Character and setting description
LI: To identify parts of a narrative.
This week for writing we are identifying our knowledge on character and setting description. Each group got to decide on a character to pick then we could vote. Our group got chosen and we decided on doing a character named Iaerell. Each group had chosen a setting.
Friday, 25 October 2019
Writing | Recount
This week our task was to write a recount with the topic of winning a sport I then picked Netball. After we finished writing our recount we had to mark 7 different areas. Ideas, S&L, Organization, Vocab, Spelling, Punctuation and Sentence Structure. From 3-5.
Friday, 18 October 2019
Lotto Recount | Writing
LI: To revise the structure of a recount and
We are now identifying our knowledge on our recount skills. In a recount there has to included a structure (TREE). We are now practising how to write a recount for our test. This recount is all relating to winning the loto.
After that we had to mark our recount using the 7 marking skills. We had to rate our marking 3-5. Ideas, Structure and language, Organisation, Vocabulary, spelling, punctuation and sentence structure. My total mark was 28.
We are now identifying our knowledge on our recount skills. In a recount there has to included a structure (TREE). We are now practising how to write a recount for our test. This recount is all relating to winning the loto.
After that we had to mark our recount using the 7 marking skills. We had to rate our marking 3-5. Ideas, Structure and language, Organisation, Vocabulary, spelling, punctuation and sentence structure. My total mark was 28.
Friday, 20 September 2019
Advertising
LI: To create an advert using knowledge and skills we have learnt.
This week for writing we had to make an ad. Our product that we had to advertise was a thneed from the Lorax. We used our knowledge of what other advertisments have and applied them on ours. We had to make this advertisment in a group. In my group there was Bella, Farzana, Alayah & Angelica. We chose to use rhymes for the advertisment because Dr. Suess makes rhymes.
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Advertising,
Writing
Friday, 13 September 2019
Advertising
LI: To learn about television advertising.
This week for writing we were looking at different types of advertising. We had to find 3 celebrities from New Zealand and wrote what the advertise. The famous people i found was Stan walker, Julian Dennison and Jacinda Ardern. Then we looked at another ad about teenagers choosing the right car. We had to answer 5 different questions.
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Advertising,
Writing
Thursday, 5 September 2019
Advertising | Slogans | Food hacks
LI: To learn about persuasive tools and advertising.
This week we were looking at more advertisements and slogans. We first looked at characters and people found in the most effective adds on cereal boxes. Then as working as a group of four we wrote down a bunch of examples of people and what they advertise. And our point of views.
Then as a group again we had to write down slogans from each categorise on the slide. Last we had to make up a slogan to advertise the school or anything to do with the school.
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Advertising,
Writing
Friday, 30 August 2019
QAR template | Flipgrid
LI:
CRAAP stands for Currency, relevancy, Authority, purpose. This week we learnt what all of these words meant. We all had a persuasive text about a topic. My groups topic was called "Change our uniforms" We had to do a synthesis and a QAR that had bunch of questions.
Flipgrid - video
Thursday, 29 August 2019
Advertising | Writing
LI: To analyse the print advert.
This week we are learning the types of tools used in a advert. To learn these tools every body got amount of words and we had to find the definition in a group. My group did slogans, Language features, catchphrase and product.
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Advertising,
Writing
Friday, 2 August 2019
Persuasive speech plan | Anxiety
Rhetorical questions are questions that make a dramatic affect. This week we had to write a persuasive speech about a topic we had to talk about. The topic I used was Anxiety and also we needed to make a arguement. My arguement was: have you ever felt like you have anxiety and want to let it go?
Thursday, 4 July 2019
Narrative play
LI: To write a narrative as a form of a play.
This week we are working on a narrative a form as a play for the past few weeks. This narrative play is about a lady who steals christmas from christvillie. In this play we had to add dialogue to make it look like they are talking to each other. A narrative is a made up story.
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Narrative play,
Writing
Friday, 28 June 2019
Christmas stolen | Orientation
LI: To write a narrative in the form of a play.
An orientation has describe the settings and the who. This week we are doing the play christmas stolen for Mr Wongs reading groups to perform. We have started on our secound storyboard that links up with the first.
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Writing
Tuesday, 18 June 2019
Narrative play
LI: To write a narrative in a form as a play.
Our play is about mother christmas and she is trying to steal christmas. my group made a dialog about the narrative we made we made fake messages of our characters talking to each other. They are talking about how they can come up with a solution to solve the problem.
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Writing
Friday, 14 June 2019
Play Narative
LI: To write a planer.
This week we have planed out a narrative play for Mr Wongs reading groups. We used the structure T.O.P.E.S.
T.O.P.E.S
T - Title
O - Orientation
P - Problem
E - Events
S - Situation
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Narrative play,
Writing
Friday, 7 June 2019
Explanation
LI:
This week for writing we had to write a explanation with any topic we wanted. My topic was the heart. We first had to plan then write working on a goggle document.
We used Times
Title
Introduction
Meaningful information
Explanation
Summary.
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Explanation,
Writing
Friday, 31 May 2019
Explanation
LI: To use key vocab to unlock sentence & text structure. This week, our task was to write an explanation of how and why LS1 Learns, Creates and Shares. We also had to write a procedure including instructions step by step how LS1 learns, create and share. An explanation tells how and/or why something happens. A procedure is a text explaining how to do something. We had to do this in pairs.
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Writing
Friday, 24 May 2019
Explanation
LI: to plan and write an explanation
We had to write an explanation about how to make chocolate. An explanation writing is how it works or why something happened. We had two explanations about the same story. We also had to make three DLO about how it is made.
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Explanation,
Writing
Friday, 17 May 2019
Cause and Effect
LI: What is a cause & effect?.
A cause and effect are in a explanation. A explanation is what something is and how it works. Today for writing we had to make a goggle slide with ten causes and effects on it and casual language between.
A cause and effect are in a explanation. A explanation is what something is and how it works. Today for writing we had to make a goggle slide with ten causes and effects on it and casual language between.
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Cause and Effect,
Writing
Thursday, 9 May 2019
Explanation Writing | Information report | Procedure
LI: What is an information report.
LI: What is an explanation.
Today for writing we are learning about explanation. We had to create two posters, One about the definitions of explanation, Information report, and Procedure. The secound poster was about explaining what present tense, possive voice, third person and time connectives is.
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Explanation,
Writing
Tuesday, 2 April 2019
Imaginative Recount | Tree
LI: To write a imaginative recount.
This week for writing we wrote a recount. we used the story little red riding hood. We had to work in pairs and had to write like if we were little red riding hood or the wolf.
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