I am a Year 6 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space1 and my teachers are Mr Wong and Mr Ogilive.
Friday, 2 November 2018
Evaluate
LI. To evaluate writing samples using the PBS writing rubric. This week for writing we had a test and we had to write about the times you had with your family. I wrote about my parents wedding. We also did evaluate. The language features are first person,time order. The struture of a recount is Tree. First person is me,I,us. Time order is what happend first,secound then last. T is tittle,R is reveal,E is events,E is ending.
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