LI: to correct certain structure and language features in a recount. This week for writing my group had to fix the struture of Mr Wong climbing mount Fuji. We had to fix up the verbs and the other words. It first was really messy then we had to fix it up to make it look good.
Greetings Charlize
ReplyDeleteI've read your blurb and it's intreasting, also its talking about Mr Wong climbing up Mount Fuji. I have the same blog post as you but a differnt blurb compared to yous. Your two photo's look great. Also I loved reading your two screenshots about the bad version and the good version.
Keep up with the good work Charlize!