The giant tortoise

Title	The giant tortoise
Orientation	There was a giant tortoise in the middle of nowhere the tortoise was hungry and was looking for food in the forest.Jack and Jill run out to see what that noise was it was making a big noise. Jack and Jill saw the giant torts in the forest.
Problem	The tortoise looked at Jack and Jill so he started to walk to them. Jack and Jill was scared The tortes was very hungry and growled at Jack and Jill. Jill run away to find food so the torts can get better
Events	Suddenly Jill gave fruits from their garden for the tortoise . so they decided to feed it with food.Jack told the torts to stop but the tortes did not understand and wanted to eat them so he tried to eat Jack and Jill but they were too fast suddenly jill tripped  over a big rock and almost got eating by the tortes.
Solution	Then Jack wanted the tortes to be his friend so he decided.But jill didn't want the to tortoise be her friend  so the torts Jack said "we can have the torts every second day" and Jill whispered "that's a good idea" so they had a deal and both of them said "yes" together. so every second day they will keep him and feed him all the time.

i learn how to write a  Story organiser my story organiser is called the giant  tortoise  it is about a giant torts how was in the forest tht was looking for food and then Jack and Jill came and see what thatnoise was jack found food on the ground and gave it to the torts for it to eat.i learn by getting idea's from LS1 site and going on to writing i had idea from that picture it was a torts and two little kids by the forest the i had to write about it in orientation problem events solution.