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Friday 30 June 2017

Haunted house

Haunted House
One haunted house was in the middle of nowhere  Emma and mum, was living in a haunted house with a friendly ghost named casper and his ghost family.Emma and mum was real scared of casper the ghost family so they made a plan there plan was to catch them with a net.Mum and Mia but they were a little bit hard to catch.Mum and Ava try to catch them but they were hiding good Casper told them to stop.



Orientation

One haunted house in the middle of nowhere Ava was living in  the haunted house with her mum they both were haunted by a ghost named casper,casper was a and so was the ghost family friendly ghost.

Problem

Ava and mum was scared of casper the friendly ghost, Ava and mum wanted to catch  casper but they couldn't because he was  hard to find he was hiding in the walls with the ghost family.

Events

Casper told his family he said to his family "there are  people in our house" mum and Ava had a plan there plan was to catch the family ghost with a net, mum said thats a good idea so they started to catch them.

Solution

Mum and Ava tried to catch the ghost but they were hard to catch finley casper tried to say that they were good and try and make short no one was allowed at this house so they try and scary the people, that lives in our house so they decide to scary them.


LI to plan a narratives quickley.I how to write a narrative propley.i learn by going on to a site and checking my work propley i had to make sure if there is vocab in it and punctuation in it.a vocab has nouns in it topic words and it has verbes.

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