Recount Edit

LI: to edit and improve a piece of writing. This week for writing we had to write a recount about either three options, A recount about a Kiwi Can Lesson, A Ki O Rahi lesson, or a Music lesson with Whea Ode. We had to get a partner and they had to try make our recount better. We get points for how many changes we had made and we get more points for additional changes. If we have more points than our partner than we win and the loser needs to write 2 more recounts about the other two recount options that we had not done. My partner was Mote. Mote's Points:

• 1 point for every change (8)
• 4 points for adjectives
• -20 if there is under 10 changes